Yay! I thought I was like the only person who'd ever heard of that book Peaches is teh cuteness

you're right, that is the main struggle. hadn't thought of that.

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Nobody likes innocents anyways, they're so boring. About the only thing they're good for is blood, and potlucks.
...your response was WRONG! Open bear trap, insert head.

YAY!!!! Fan-art for an awesome book! Faving.

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Personalities are a turn-on. ~<33

Hey awsome our skwl is putting on play of this book! Im the mayour.

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Cogito Ergo Sum.

I'l see you on the other side.

I like it, I may have some actual critique, but first what was the medium? I don't want to be saying anything stupid, so I shouldn't say anything unless I at least kind of know what I'm talking about. Was it pencil and paper and then scanned? I hope you're having a good summer. My brothers and I all read that book. I told you I would eventually commment properly, but this is all for now because I have class at 8 tomorrow.
Khalid B. Kunji

It was pencil and paper. Also, it was done over four years ago; I've lost the original somewhere.

Ok, the proportions seem right (assuming that the peach's writing utensil is not a pencil). The tail might be a little on the thick side though. The main thing is that it seems blurred. It could be from the scanning process, or the lead could have been smudged. If it was the lead, the I guess I would just say to be careful, though I know I end up smudging most things I draw. Maybe use a harder lead for parts, or sharper pencil, some parts just seem like they somewhat sharper lines. Overall it's quite good though. :thumb5765372:

It should say, "some parts just seem like they could use somewhat sharper lines." Rather than, "some parts just seem like they somewhat sharper lines." Also, I don't really know what the ":thumb5765372:" is from, oh well.

I loved that book, you can read it on so many levels. The parts I liked the most were those in which you could see the rats changing (when they began to fear the dark, for example), so I really like your choiche. And the soft lines fit well Peaches.